little miss military brat

yup, i'm hooked. the prologue was good, and this is even better. you were good with the detail. i liked the comedy too. very few stories can make me truly ...

I liked it. I almost started to cry. (I'm super emotional like that.) I really liked Edward up until he left Bella, and he has yet to redeem himself in ...

I like it. You included plenty of detail and I like how you described and explained your character's choice. I would love to read more of this story if you ...

I liked how you included the other characters' thoughts in there, instead of just focusing on edward and bella.